001 Mars For Astrologers — With the power of the Jewish News Network,
002 the Planet Mars can impact humanity, just as the Moon throws the
003 tides back and forth, so Mars can throw the states around.
004 Mars does not seem to distinguish you apart from one sitting next to you.
[NOTE: "distinguish you apart from" is awkward — consider "distinguish you from"]
005 Legion 13 — Fabled legion of Rome that closely followed the Martian Temple.
006 Osiris and ISS — The International Space Station was born in the Year
007 of the Tiger (1998) like Tom was (1986). Because people believe Tom
008 is Osiris, his partner is therefore Isis (sounds like ISS)
009 and she should be younger and heavenly. ISS (aka X-23) will soon be
010 decommissioned with the Star of Sirius directly overhead.
[NOTE: "sounds like ISS" reads as an aside — consider em-dash or parenthetical for consistency]
011 Donations: 3DiPigEtQLMoiRJFfAvmEy6mKJipMzsZDw
[NOTE: "donations" section interrupts narrative flow — consider moving to header or footer]
012 News reports video gaming is America's most structured ritual.
013 The lives of their characters are not valuable in video games.
014 Therefore, a movement claiming planet Earth is the video game
015 is a dangerous one.
016 Its prophets, many of them wannabe astronauts,
017 believe the new Temple of Mars is reforming.
018 Engineers of ancient Rome knew Romans would make it back to Mars one day.
[NOTE: original had "BACK TO MARS" in caps — preserved as lowercase for scripture tone consistency; restore caps if emphasis intended]
019 Para bellum shouted, parabola spotted, shields!
020 Problem properly purported.
[NOTE: "para bellum / parabola / purported" alliterative structure is strong — intentional?]
021 The energy and range of Roman missiles steadily empowered their beliefs.
022 Today's video gamers are the believers tempted by high speeds and physics.
023 Some gamers have moved through belief to knowledge.
024 Extremists of the Temple of Mars are certain they will go into the video game.
025 The story of the first king of Egypt says he arrived on a boat
026 from Atlantis after the great flood.
027 In these days, the world believed in evolution as we do today.
028 However, they believed in snake-based evolution
029 rather than Darwin's fish-based evolution.
030 The snake and the fish, you see?
031 The snake represents the man as the letter S,
032 and you can use it to make multiples.
033 The fish represents the woman as the letter M,
034 a letter which represents lady lumps,
035 and M is used to pluralize in more ancient languages.
036 The ancients believed in the snake which eats the egg.
037 An egg is in a way like a human head.
038 As the baby bird forms inside, so your thoughts and understanding grow as you age.
039 At the end of your life the baby bird leaves the egg
040 as your spirit leaves your cranium behind,
041 thrust into the afterlife as the baby bird takes its first step.
[NOTE: "baby bird" used three times in close succession — consider varying on one instance]
042 The snake is a creature more basic than any,
043 as it is just a spine and a head,
044 and so it was easy to understand how everything evolved from it.
045 Anxiety and fear of the snake reinforces the idea the snake is special,
046 as the original member of the Animus Imperious.
[NOTE: "Animus Imperious" — capitalized as a proper title/concept; confirm intended]
047 In the universal search for where we humans come from, there is another.
[NOTE: "there is another" — another what? Sentence feels incomplete; intentional mystery or missing clause?]
048 Snake-based evolution was more like a theory,
049 since there is no great evidence beyond our imaginations.
050 With the constellation of Orion we have far more to go on
051 and therefore far more certainty.
[NOTE: changed "go off of" to "go on" — grammatical cleanup]
052 Perhaps millions of years ago our ape-like ancestors grew conscious enough,
053 with eyes good enough, to stargaze.
054 They saw something that resembled them in Orion,
055 except something wasn't the same.
056 They learned from Orion and copied what he was doing
057 like a son mimics the ways of his father.
058 Eventually, the constellation impacted our DNA structure itself.
059 Our ancestors began standing tall with their shoulders back
060 as they walked around on two legs.
061 More time went on, and we never forgot how important a teacher Orion is.
[NOTE: changed "how important of a teacher" to "how important a teacher" — grammar fix]
062 For hundreds of thousands of years the father taught his son
063 to never forget Orion,
064 for everything we need to know has come from him.
065 Our minds never forgot how to understand where we came from.
066 Our father never neglected to teach us.
067 We used the constellation as the blueprint today
068 because we did so yesterday,
069 giving us the bow and arrow, including how to hold them.
070 Orion taught us to keep a knife in a sheath around the waist.
071 It gave us a dog with a heart so strong
072 it was the brightest star in the sky.
[NOTE: "it gave us a dog" — subject shift from Orion to the belt/constellation; consider "He gave us" for consistency]
073 In the ancient world the ruler of Egypt constructed the great pyramids
074 to honor the constellation.
075 Pharaoh believed in evolution,
076 and he believed Orion is where we came from.
077 He was so respectful of Orion and our ancestors
078 he built the largest and longest-lasting structure of all time.
[NOTE: "all-time" hyphen removed — "all time" preferred as noun phrase here]
079 For so very long father taught son to follow Orion to the future son.
[NOTE: "to the future son" — meaning unclear; is this "unto the future son" or "for the future son"?]
080 Follow Orion means follow him around the world
081 as we did when we left Africa.
082 Follow Orion means follow the three wise kings to the heart of the dog,
083 which points at the location of the sun on July 25.
084 This is what the Bible verse Matthew 2:2 is describing on July 25.
085 This was the ancient Egyptian new year.
086 It marks the flooding of the Nile Delta and the beginning of the growing season.
087 Three months later the Orionids arrive, signaling the end of the season.
088 The Orionids are a spectacular show where shooting stars arrive
089 as arrows being shot by Orion's bow.
090 July 25 is my birthday, while my dad's name is the Bible verse about it.
[NOTE: "my dad's name is the Bible verse" — consider clarifying: "my dad's name is Matthew" for readers unfamiliar]
091 In order to understand how important Orion is to our DNA,
092 you must understand the process of development and evolution,
093 and you must also be able to recognize Orion as the first constellation.
094 Can you tell that one is more obviously something familiar?
095 In a sky full of stars and constellations,
096 it is Orion alone that can be spotted by a child for what it is.
097 Our ancestors were guided by Orion through the entire span of history.
098 Does it come as any wonder to you then,
099 the one they call most evolved,
100 the one they call the leader,
101 the one born at the greatest center of the greatest civilization,
102 is inhabited by a spirit from the heavens?
103 He was born with a birthmark of Orion, indicating a Sirius heart,
104 and pi for a third eye.
[NOTE: "pi for a third eye" — confirm "pi" (π) is intended, not "pie" or "an eye like pi"]
105 Our DNA has been so massively altered by stargazing
106 that the stars of the constellation are placed
107 according to their luminosity as well as their position.
108 Today, popular belief in the Orion constellation is centered on
109 the three wise kings known as Orion's Belt,
110 following the Star of Bethlehem to the birth of the newborn king.
111 Believers in Christianity can easily extend their teachings
112 all the way back to when we first walked upright
113 without affecting previously held beliefs.
114 We followed Orion to the future sun time and time again.
[NOTE: "future sun" — unclear phrase; intentional cosmological term or should it be "the rising sun"?]
115 Orion has always kept our dream alive that humans live in the sky.
116 In modern times we have rediscovered evolution but did away with the snake.
117 We then used evolution to discover the epic tale of Orion,
118 the faceless silhouette of a man in our night sky.
119 Orion rises when the world demands a hero,
120 while Mars rises on the night demanding a warrior.
121 Orion does not seek worship, only remembrance,
122 while Mars seeks rank and hierarchy.
123 Orion's path is written in light,
124 while the path of Mars is carved in flame.
125 Heroism, rank, and hierarchy of the world wars
126 brought humans into the modern world,
127 leading us to the rise of video games and the exploration of Mars.
128 In the future, humans will somehow find a way
129 to go inside the video game worlds as a life-form.
[NOTE: changed "video games worlds" to "video game worlds" — grammar fix]
130 In the future, the Romans continue their quest to make it back to Mars.
[NOTE: tense shift — "the Romans continue" is present tense in a future-looking sentence; consider "the Romans will continue"]
131 What was once just the dream of the greatest engineers
132 comes to a reality everyone can believe in.
133 I was born ten years after the discovery of the Face on Mars,
134 in the heart of a properly sized city,
135 where it was found, resembling the civilization around the great pyramids.
[NOTE: "where it was found, resembling" — ambiguous antecedent; does the city resemble or the face resemble?]
136 Ten years after America's 250th birthday
137 it will be the 50th POTUS and my 50th birthday,
138 and America will be asking for 50/50.
139 The face is in the heart of a city shaped like a great lion,
140 as the face of my wife has resided in my heart just as long.
141 Am I the lion and tiger of Christmas in July?
142 Ten years to the day after I was disrespected,
143 on the same latitude as the Face on Mars, the god of war,
144 and in the same location where I was born,
145 a tornado outbreak occurred, throwing foreign bodies into the sky.
146 In the first voyage to Mars we may find things difficult to deal with.
147 In the first manned mission, the cosmonauts bleed from their orifices
148 and die suddenly, seemingly randomly.
149 It is only then that Mother Earth's inhabitants learn to sail the blueshift
150 as we once learned to sail the seas.
151 The Face on Mars, the god of war, was discovered
152 on the same latitude and on the same day as me —
153 July 25, 1986.
[NOTE: separated date onto its own line for dramatic emphasis — matches scripture cadence]
154 However, that does not prove my ancestors built the face in their image,
155 nor mine, of a previous Geneva tribe.
[NOTE: changed "geneva-tribe" to "Geneva tribe" — proper noun, hyphen removed]
156 We may send hundreds of Ravs to Cydonia
157 to carve a path for the rest of Earth's inhabitants.
[NOTE: "cydynya" corrected to "Cydonia" — the standard spelling of the Martian region; if "Cydynya" is an intentional alternate/invented name, restore it]
158 Cydonia, most verily named after Cyprus.
159 Earth's destiny is to renovate the face
160 and excavate the pyramids of the lion-shaped city.
161 Xbox controllers will instantly stream to Ravs with quantum entanglement.
[NOTE: "ixbox" corrected to "Xbox" — assumed brand name; restore if intentional alternate spelling]
162 How is it possible human ancestors built enormous structures on Mars?
163 Can we go there at all?
164 Will sailing the blueshift be enough to keep Earth's inhabitants?
165 Is mankind trapped in its environment like the blowfish or the blobfish?
166 Is it possible the blobfish cannot survive at the surface of the sea
167 for exactly the same reason we cannot travel farther from our star?
168 Until we resolve these issues,
169 we will be constructing a replica of the face
170 in the midcenter arena of the land down under,
171 with hacked video game controllers, consoles, and fiber optic internet.
172 There was a dream that was Rome.
173 Historians will record there was at first something missing
174 from the lives of the video gamers.
175 It will be remembered how video games spontaneously emerged
176 as the most powerful and obvious religion of all of human history.
177 A relationship with the sun and the Temple of Mars followed,
178 with an expansion to our old planet.
179 Humanity could take flight.